Ok...I'll give it a go...I'll only post what I didn't like in the track (not many things actually
Firstly: The kick you have sounds like it's a little behind the mix, like it's comin out from the back of the room, maybe bring it up infront just a litte?
Second: The baseline sounds like a constantly playing sine wave on a low octave (at least it sounds that way on my crappy speakers ). My subwoofer just vibrates without an aparent vibe in it...like it's just spitting noise
Third...the piano part in the hook seems a little slow paced compared to the rest of the track (it felt that way when I listened to it the first time), maybe make it a little faster or something?
And lastly...The beat feels a little repetitive...after the ending of the first hook my ears didn't pick out anything new in the beat (maybe it was there but hasn't gotten my attention? )... vocals could cover that aspect up but you need to make the singer interested in the track before he makes the track interesting to the average listener .
That's about all the negative comment I have about the track, maybe someone else could give out some more/better pointers