New to the Game has a lot of potential. The bass kicks are powerful, but I'd turn em down a bit and fix up that bassline you got going there. The high melody is cool, but repetitive. I'd say make the snare more defined. It should be louder.
As for your latest beat, turn up those synths and make sure those bass hits are clean. They go by kinda fast. Do that and you should be good, in my opinion.