Whattup Powda B.
First off, nice beat man, you've got some sick sounds and melodies.
One thing i noticed was the snare drum sounds pretty stock, like the one that comes preloaded on FL, it would probably help to find a more unique, pro sounding one. you could find one pretty easy with some free online sample packs
the drums overall, but especially the kick, need to be turned a fair bit up. You really want the drum pattern in the foreground.
Your melodies and instruments are great, you've got quite a fresh sound, i'm loving it. I would probably turn down the lead just a touch, so it's not dominating the track too much though, but thats just a matter of taste
Keep up the good work
Respect, Jayye Cruz.
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